Friday, May 18, 2012

Table of contents

Included in this book section is as follows:
1) Introduction

2) Day to night

3) In open sea

4) No good you

5) Forever love

6) kids are wiled bears

7) You see this

Introduction

          Now i would like to formaly introduce myself, my name is Rebecca Zang. I go to C.C.H.S.. Writing this at fifteen years old i am a freshman. I used to go to Unity Point rite outside of makanda. From pre-k to 8th grade i had gone there. I have lived in "point place" for about forteen years. Now finaly ending freshman year, i regret nothing.           Personaly, my favorite poem out of this selection was Forever love. I like this poem the most because it is a description of a weading. Where the bride is walking down the isle to meat her true love. To hold, as said in the peom, always and forever. I hope you also like this poem because i hope that you were able to understand its beauty.
          Next I would like to tell you the poem that i wrote that i did not like as much as any of the others. That was No good you. I don't like this song because it brings your emotions down. It is a depressing poem. Decribing failure and the inability to ever amount to anything I find it depressing to read.
          Without a boubt, I can say I have learned a few things in this poeatry lesson. One thing i was able to grasp and learn was that nomatter whom you are, short, tall, rich, or just not so much, if you put yourself out ther, you will go far. If you try your best, and put your work into the world, someone will notice.
          I have also learned that writing poetry can take away stress. If you write down what you feel, like in a poem, alot of stress can be taken away from your life. You might not even realize it at points, but it does. You ushaly can feel a huge weight on your shoulder just flote away wit hevery word you write.

Friday, May 11, 2012

You see this?

The smell of new heals
New dresses
Old tuxes handed down
And down
Tast of fog and punch
Feel of people all around
Dancing
Moving
Talking
Hear the coversations
People yelling
Yet nothing being said
Nothing left to do
But join the party
Move your feet on the floor
Feel the bace of the song
Nothing left to do
But enjoy.

Kids are wild bears

Come home
After a long day
Look around
*sigh*
Yet again
These kids
Are like wild animals
Like wild bears
A bear that comes in
Then takes over
Knocks over the light
Sitting solemly
On the ground broken
Walk into the kitchen and look around again
Food on the floor
Scattered on the floor
On the counter
Tworn to pieces
Things that were on shelvs
Now scattered all around
No place to walk
No place to go
Furnature tworn to shreds
No place to be
Just have to leave